As I sat here reading people's papers and reflecting on what has happened over the course of the semester all I can think about it is how come these people are great writers and when I turn in a paper I dont get the gread that I thought I would. To be point blank-it hurts it makes me rethink, why am I going to college again? If I cant make it in a silly English class how am I suppose to make it as a teacher? It hurts. I'm not trying to pull the oh-poor-me card, its just really how I feel (today atleast).
The things that I treasure from this class is the different thoughts and rhetorics that I learned from. The most inspiring pieces that I read was Elbow/Bartholomae readings. They really made me think and to consider different things in my writing.
Dr. A, did a good job presenting lesssons and I give her total kuddos for everything that she did! (thanks dr.A) As an overall view of my growth, I really think that I grew more as a person rather than an academic (which might come bite me the butt later) and with out this class I really dont think I could have done it!
Wow your paper is really good. It made me remember the fun things that I did when I went to Outdoor Ed. Thanks for the flashback--but your paper was well organized, many details which made it easy for me to read. The part that I liked about your paper was the vivid imagine of the girls crying. Over all I really liked the memoir. Your over all blog was really good I liked the organization you had. If I were to give you a grade on the total aspect of the blog it would be an "A!' Great job Meagan!!
As I have seen you change things through your paper to make it even more brilliant the one thing that I really liked that you didn’t change was the tone in your voice and your voice all together. It makes me remember the wonderful memories that I had with my grandpa. Thank you for that..sometimes we need to remember the good things and not the bad. The paper as a whole was terrific! Great word choice and great ideas and thoughts and your voice was amazing!
Your blog as a whole was great! It is easy to navigated and I was able to find things in a jiffy!
As I saw your paper in the first form and now in its last..it is a great paper as a whole. I liked the emotion and the details that you put in and your voice is amazing! I was able to cnnect with your and your memory. The paper as a whole is well orgainized and well thought out! Great Job!
Your paper is really good! I really wish I could write like you do. Your paper really brings out the emotions that I have about racism and more importantly the emotion that I have as a future teacher getting ready to impact childrens lives with the history of our so called "wonderful" world. Your paper is inspiring and very well thought out... LOVE IT!!
Posted by katiegirl0120 on December 12, 2008
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